tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-611237101324711595.post7056628507774685831..comments2013-12-29T16:35:21.802+01:00Comments on Scrawling Outside of the Box: Deadly Writing SinsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14869145555938203736noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-611237101324711595.post-26447077625116848702010-06-07T20:27:39.696+02:002010-06-07T20:27:39.696+02:00Now I must ask which metaphor that is! I haven'...Now I must ask which metaphor that is! I haven't read her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14869145555938203736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-611237101324711595.post-11056410865701582462010-06-07T20:22:08.626+02:002010-06-07T20:22:08.626+02:00I got one from Anne Rice, an otherwise great autho...I got one from Anne Rice, an otherwise great author. <br />Don't let your metaphores take over the story, no matter how beatiful you think they are.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00009596434016615843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-611237101324711595.post-80872485629553644282010-06-07T19:55:22.138+02:002010-06-07T19:55:22.138+02:00*LOL* Yes, please keep the bodily functions to a m...*LOL* Yes, please keep the bodily functions to a minimum as well!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14869145555938203736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-611237101324711595.post-70931687096221357872010-06-07T19:41:37.142+02:002010-06-07T19:41:37.142+02:00One from the book I'm current reading (Altered...One from the book I'm current reading (<i>Altered Carbon</i>, if you're wondering):<br /><br />Yes, I'm interested in what the character is doing. No, I'm not interested in what his penis is doing. Seriously. I have no desire to hear about the shiftings in his crotch in regards to everything that happens: cute women, guy with gun, waking up...ugh.Angela Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12283365861048428440noreply@blogger.com